As you’re working with your group to complete a draft of your Observation/Analysis paper, you might find it helpful to check out these two samples. One of them is written by a group of students in a previous class; the other is an individually-written paper. Neither is perfect, but both offer ideas about organization, focus, how to include analysis, and how to include both insider and outsider views/language. Take these as models, not templates. That is, do not feel like you need to write something that looks exactly like these look.
Sample One [pdf]
Sample Two [pdf]